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Weighted Companion Cube by ~VG-Zoodle:iconVG-Zoodle:



Today is another day of testing,
I walk through the cold, white rooms,
As I stop, calmly resting,
A hatch opens, and drops you in my life.

Your cold, hard exterior, a shell,
Your metal covers your soft heart,
You came to rescue me from hell,
And now we walk together.

I jump atop you, and you make me taller,
We run along the long white room,
And even as the corridor gets smaller,
I know you'll save us from all problems.

You act as shield, weight and friend,
As a stool, you have no better,
And then she speaks, and I fear the end,
You hold the button, I press the switch.

The hatch opens, to a flaming grave,
She tells me all this must be done,
Suddenly, you speak to me, say I must be brave,
I worry for my sanity, as you start to smile.

I wonder how a cube could grin,
But then the warm air reminds me,
I want to keep you, greed is my sin,
She speaks again, an angry tone.

I lift you up, above your fiery demise,
Once again, you speak to me,
You tell me that there will be a surprise,
Once I finish walking through the rooms.

You, the one I loved, and eventually dropped down a tube,
You, my one and only friend, the Aperture Science Companion Cube.
©2007-2009 ~VG-Zoodle
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Author's Comments

Well, this is my poem about the Aperture Science Weighted Companion cube, from the game Portal, made by Valve, the creators of Half-Life and other great games.

I wrote it one night when I was bored, and here it is. Enjoy.

Aperture Science, the Weighted Companion Cube and any other references to Portal are (c) Valve Corporation.

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:iconsadria:
Wewt!!! I love this, Dill. I so PROUD of you! <3<3<3

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:iconvg-zoodle:
Hehe, thankee sis! When I wrote this, I didn't think it was very good. xP

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:icondrlavitz:
It's amazing.

It gave me chills.

You've won 100000 internets.

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THE CAKE IS A LIE... Poor WCC, she never got any cake T.T
:iconvg-zoodle:
Aw, thanks random person who I didn't pay to say that!

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:icondeepchrome:
It's cute. I like how you've got some nice emotions coming through in the words--and how your Chell relates to every single player who's had to drop their best six-sided friend in an Emergency Intelligence Incinerator.

Nice.

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:iconvg-zoodle:
Thanks. I spent about thirty minutes, maybe an hour, on it. Most of it pretty much wrote itself, but there were some parts that I had trouble on.

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:icondeepchrome:
Anytime. Sometimes the quick ones turn out the best. :D

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:icongyromorgian:
Best weighted-companion cube poem in the entire history of literature.

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:iconvg-zoodle:
Haha, thanks! I wish there were more though. There's only one other, that I know of, on deviantART. Maybe if there were more mine wouldn't be the best. :3

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:iconrocketwithpika:
;----; So beautiful.. BAAAAWWWW ;---------;

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